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-KoRnflakes
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KoRnflakes

3 years ago
See what happends, when you go away but your homework comes alive. My personal task was to create a story with personality, emotions etc without using mimic, arms and legs.
This short was part of my my diploma-thesis "Emotionality in three-dimensional abstraction"(june08) . At this I analyse the possibility to give life to primitive geometric physiques without changing the figures with extremities or facial expression. I use the some of the 12 Animation principles to underline and enhance the expressions. Everthing is done by myself, from concept scetches to final gathering with music and effects in nearly one month with a standard laptop.

see the vid here: [Link to www.aniboom.com]

This Movie is also in competition on aniboom. So i would be really glad if you can support ...just when u like it =) View, fave or send it to friends would be really helpful. Thx alot

additionally every feedback (especially the negativ - bad ones) are welcome cause so i can improve my work.

[Link to www.aniboom.com]

+Steve Martin
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Steve Martin

3 years ago
That's very cool. Great compositing and some interesting effects. Well done.
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-dragonfly
Member
dragonfly

3 years ago
Thats a good animation, i like how you give live to simple primitives, Very good
Everything has some beauty but not everyone is able to see it (Confucius)

-jovanie_
Member
jovanie_

3 years ago
sorry can't view for some reason...
Started Max last September 2008

Jovanie_
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-KoRnflakes
Junior Member
KoRnflakes

3 years ago
thx alot for the positive feedback, nevertheless i need ur support and opinions to improve my work.
[Link to www.aniboom.com]

+Jamie
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Jamie

3 years ago
I like the idea and it is a good short overall.

2 points:

There is some serious mesh deforming issues at points and to the average person this might not matter, but to me it was obvious and it distracted me from the film.

Secondly I had no idea what the blue rectangle was attempting to do with the rubix cube.

Other than that a good animation. I love the the compositing work.

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-Nobodyz
Member
Nobodyz

3 years ago
I'd have to agree with +Jamie about the deforming

I Vote for Yellow Pyramid, she is the sexy one! lol

-Tyson
Senior Member
Tyson

3 years ago
Nice work. An ambitious project that you complete is impressive enough.
good compositing and effects. I guess my only crit is similar to Jamie's I was a little confused at times as to their motivations but it was good overall.

-KoRnflakes
Junior Member
KoRnflakes

3 years ago
thx alot for the helpful feedback! and please hold on to support me and my movie. thx
[Link to www.aniboom.com]

-KoRnflakes
Junior Member
KoRnflakes

3 years ago
hey again, would be very very glad to hear "more" opinions about this shortmovie. I'm still in concepting a new short and i really want to improve the next movie. So it is necessary for me to get a feeling about the mistakes i've done. Thats why i'm requesting you for feedback, especially what u don't like. Thx alot

[Link to www.aniboom.com]

+isaac
Moderator
isaac

3 years ago
Wow That was really cool! Way to go!

-KoRnflakes
Junior Member
KoRnflakes

3 years ago
wow thx alot =) nice to hear that u like it
[Link to www.aniboom.com]

-musashiroth
Member
musashiroth

3 years ago
I agree with Jamie, to some level.. I actually liked the slight deformation inperffections, I didnt get what the rectangle was doing with the rubix cube.. but I had one more to add.. and I was watching the ball carefully and what distracted me was that in his scene when he's getting all inked up, the last jump he does, it doesnt seem to connect with the floor. Check it out, bc it's the only thing in the animation that got me to go back and double check.

Its a great animation btw. Great concept, awsome camara angles, and great movement on all of the objects.

Great job!
MuS@shiROth


-Norbertle
Junior Member
Norbertle

3 years ago
Great job on the film. Music fitted perfectly! smile.gif

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