wow, it really starts to creep me out by the last 2 seconds
I think there are two visible problems in it though, the texture on the round frame of bricks around the clock stretches on the 2 sides.. and that the shape is a bit elongated vertically, Idk if its my screen or what
everything else is cool
maybe composite some zombies dropping from the clock tower haha

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Also some of the gears are intersecting at the start. I never know how much crit to give these things because I know you're not really going for a polished narative driven, as you say, it's just for training. I think in that respects it looks fine other than the little things we've already mentioned.

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Awesome, thanks. yes, just training

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Those bright GI glitches almost looked like shafts of light coming in through holes in walls or something. maybe you could try and get that type of thing happening in the lighting. Having strong patches of light streaming into a dark space is a great way to get some good contrast and mood into the images. Also when it pulls out of the tower it really needs some sort of environment beyond it. even if its just fogged up copies of the buildings you already (have have you used the environment fog effect before?). To give it a feeling of space and depth. great mood in this one.

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Thanks Tyson Yeah, most of your crits are right, and yeah, I have used the fog before. works good thanks

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