I really like it! Good detail and stuff. Will look cool later, I'm sure of that. Can you give us a total shot maybe? Like the one you did as the first render, I loved that camera position.

Great job!

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Okies, gonna render that one now, although I changed the lighting in this one, ill render one final shot in the day as the first one again after the texturing is done =D

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"I'm like a rookie paramedic to a siren, praying for an accident.."
Cute Is What We Aim For

Great, love it

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Update, didnt do alot, but took me whole day just to change the light -.-

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"I'm like a rookie paramedic to a siren, praying for an accident.."
Cute Is What We Aim For

I really love the textures so far. great job on those, lightning is so neat! awesome man.

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Looks great so far. The mirror looks more melted than broken though, Is that done with materials or did you model it?

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Chris

modelled it.. I think I pushed it in a little bit more, I'll fix it thnx

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"I'm like a rookie paramedic to a siren, praying for an accident.."
Cute Is What We Aim For

looks good man, but some improvements:
1) the checkboard patterns on the walls don't really go with anything in the scene. i don't know if you've just put that for testing purposes.
2) i know this is supposed to be a dark, gloomy scene, but i sort of liked that light from the window in your previous thread. it gave it an eerie touch.
3) the concept is a little out of sorts. why is there a police cordon in a stairwell? that skull doesn't explain much... the ground seems to be soil, with plants, how is that indoors? if you're going for a surreal effect, you'll need to flesh out the concept a bit more maybe.

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Cogito, Ergo Sum

its just a wip, probably has shitloads more to tweak and add and tweak more lol
-1- Yup, testing purposes/mapping
-2- Yeah, need to tweak that a tad bit more, actually I overexposed the sky map to get the clouds as an artifacts on thr ground, was just a trick that caught my eye when i accidenlty did it somewhere else haha
-3- Its kinda a crime scene at an old house of a really old interior decorator.. he never gets down of his house, always stays upstairs in a dim red light counting his last days.. the ground floor has almost been turned into a very shallow swamp thingy, and the skull is cuz u suggested to add skeletons etc, i didnt have a whole skeleton modelled so thought ild just add the skull LOL, still ill break it and submerge it a bit into the mudd and shit.. but you get the point, gonna work on it tomorrow
thanx alot for the feedback homie!
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"I'm like a rookie paramedic to a siren, praying for an accident.."
Cute Is What We Aim For

no problem man.
the skull and crime scene etc are cool, what i meant was the person viewing this picture should be able to figure some part of the story without you having to explain.... i see a couple of newspapers (?) on the ground...maybe you could arrange the shot so that the viewer is able to read some part of the headline, which gives him/her an idea of what happened there.
or something less obvious than that.
anyways, keep working on it! it's coming along well

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Cogito, Ergo Sum

It's looking pretty good. I think the grass is a bit too upright, long blades like that would ususally be bending down under their own weight. Might be a good idea at model some detail into the ground as well.

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