My only crit so far would be that lounges aren't usually that rounded underneath. Other than that it's a pretty good start. Even though you're new to max it's obvious you've had some experience with producing artistic images, as the lighting is pretty spot on. It's good that you've been able to carry the skill over from photography.

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bit to yellowish for me, try adding a bit of blue color to your ambient light, anyhow looks good so far, looking forward on update.

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The secret of creativity is knowing how to hide your sources.
-Albert Einstein

Lost all the info of my models so needed to start all over again

this is what i have atm
Crits are welcome!

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Looks good so far, better than the orginal for sure. You may want to add some bevels on those hard edges, even just a really small amount can catch highlights a lot better. Looks great though, keep up the good work.

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New upload!

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Looking better already. The light looks really natural and your models look good. What renderer are you using?

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Vray! love the photography stuff in it.

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Yeh, vray's cool. I haven't used it for a while. I miss it.

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LOOKING GREAT! WOW! I love the wood texture. Now its all about color in the walls some texture for your decor, and a sealing lamp! and I think you're set!

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MuS@shiROth

Thanks man! i doubt about a lighter wood texture but i will think about it
Sealing lamp is in progress!

i`m this far atm!

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<-- The Noobie dares!!
The floor texture should be tiled a bit more: those parquet laths seem a bit too big, to me... =o
Free to whip me for this comment!! >.<

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No Gods but Yourself!! >.<

no its true! i still dint changed it. I saw it in previous render but forgot it.
thanks for the reminder

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