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-avogart
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avogart

1 year ago
Hi there, this is a cd cover design I just created on Photoshop. I would appreciate any critics and/or advise you write to me, it will help to improve my art works in the future.
Thanks in advance.
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+Steve Martin
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Steve Martin

1 year ago
I'm getting an error message. To post images, click the file button under your post and upload it from there.
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-avogart
Junior Member
avogart

1 year ago
Thanks for the advise, but I can't get my image thumbnail to load in a larger page, do I need to do anything else? thanks for the support.

+Steve Martin
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Steve Martin

1 year ago
Seems to be working now. Not sure how much advice I can give on this, it's not an area that I'm really familiar with. I'd probably just say that there are a couple of shadows that don't look quite right, the shadow where the back wall meets the ceiling is one of them, it should probably match what the side wall shadows are doing. Also there seems to be a shadow running along the bottom of the pictures on the left that shouldn't be there. Other than that its a pretty good first up effort. What sort of techiques did you use? All photoshop or is there a bit of 3d there as well?
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-avogart
Junior Member
avogart

1 year ago
I really appreciate your critics Steve, I'll spend more time working on lights and shadows.
And answering your question, yes, it is all made with Photoshop.

-JackTheFunk
Member
JackTheFunk

1 year ago
I love it man, very surreal. grin.gif

Only crits i can offer are that the baby's shadow looks as if the light source is directly to the left of it, rather than from the ceiling light, and maybe some darkening of the corners of the room and where the walls meet the floor, kind of like an ambient occlusion effect might give it a little more realism. Great work though dude.

-avogart
Junior Member
avogart

1 year ago
Thank you Jack, I really appreciate your critics, I'll spend more time working on light and shadows effects next time. Thanx again

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