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-SpitFire
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SpitFire

3 years ago
Here is a model I am creating for a commercial for our local 4th of July Fireworks and Air Show. Just started today, so I have a lot to do.


Rick

[Link to www.3dartconcepts.com]

+VarnishedOtter
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VarnishedOtter

3 years ago
Nice, very slick. No crits so far it looks pretty accurate. Cant wait to see this with a texmap.
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+atg
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atg

3 years ago
Hmmm the warbird buff in me wants to go on about the inaccuracies, but I'm pedantic like that tongue.gif

Nice work there.
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+VarnishedOtter
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VarnishedOtter

3 years ago
Do it, he'll probably appreciate the crits.
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+atg
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atg

3 years ago
OK not really anything major and sorry if I'm jumping the gun as it is a work in progress:

The cockpit (while a bit off) makes it look like your going for an early model p51 (allison engined), while the engine faring is that of a late model (Merlin-engined). Propeller also needs to be three-bladed for an early model, or three/four bladed for a later.

I've attached a couple of pics to show what I mean.

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-SpitFire
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SpitFire

3 years ago
The blue prints I have are for the earlier model from the looks of it. My plans only showed 2 blades, but I am going to change it to 3. This is just my first day on it so I have a lot of tweaking to do.. Thanks for the input.
Rick

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+Steve Martin
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Steve Martin

3 years ago
Looks awesome Rick. No crits as yet, though atg makes some good points.
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-SpitFire
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SpitFire

3 years ago
Thank you Steve. I'm going to work on it some more today.
Rick

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-johnbeyer
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johnbeyer

3 years ago
Lovely Rick! nice job man. I love it.

-SpitFire
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SpitFire

3 years ago

+Jamie
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Jamie

3 years ago
Nice work, atg has some good crits, is this paid work?
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-SpitFire
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SpitFire

3 years ago
No, voluntary for my church.
Rick

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-desade2009
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desade2009

3 years ago
kickass! i love modelled planes! will you be making an animation of this? (fingers crossed)

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-SpitFire
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SpitFire

3 years ago

-SpitFire
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SpitFire

3 years ago
Well, I've posted another update. I've spent a few hours on it today. I appreciate the crits and the photo reference. It's really starting to come together. It will probably somewhat textured like this for the commercial as it will fit the look they are going for, but afterward, I will spend more time on landing gear. I still have a lot of stuff to do on this and will post another update soon.

Thanks again.
Rick

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+Steve Martin
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Steve Martin

3 years ago
My only suggestion would be to harden the edges around where the guns attach to the wings a little bit. Other than that it's looking really good.
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-SpitFire
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SpitFire

3 years ago
I'm getting closer to being done.
Rick

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+Steve Martin
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Steve Martin

3 years ago
Updates look good. Can't find anything to complain about wink.gif
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-SpitFire
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SpitFire

3 years ago

-johnbeyer
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johnbeyer

3 years ago
Love the update, great job.

-griffinax
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griffinax

3 years ago
this is looking neat
can't wait to see some dirt on there grin.gif
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-SpitFire
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SpitFire

3 years ago
They will come with the scene I have in mind. Hint ... Dog fight in the clouds!
Rick

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-koxy
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koxy

3 years ago
Looks great! I love it!
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-SpitFire
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SpitFire

3 years ago

-SpitFire
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SpitFire

3 years ago
If anyone is interest, the commercial for the "I Love America" 4th of July Celebration is complete for my church. They will be airing it in mid June. Every year this event draws in over 100,000 people. They have an airshow, concert, kids games and of course, fireworks. I was very happy to be able to participate in this. They have never put 3D in their commercial before.

These are the elements I added:
Rockets (with Afterburn) , Fireworks (particle Flow), Lady Bug, Banner, Planes (with Afterburn Smoke) & Birds

All the other Elements with Illustrator and After Effects, plus the audio was done by someone else at church.

[Link to virb.com]

I think the whole thing came out awesome!
Rick

[Link to www.3dartconcepts.com]

-cdballew
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cdballew

3 years ago
Hmmmm, How did I miss this? Turned out great! Shame the plane didn't get a bit more screen time though.
Chris

-SpitFire
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SpitFire

3 years ago
Hehe... I hear ya.. 18 hours of modeling for 1 second on the screen..lol.. Good thing I didn't need detailed textures. But it great to see something I did on tv. Make you feel like it was all worth it.
Rick

[Link to www.3dartconcepts.com]

+Steve Martin
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Steve Martin

2 years ago
That was rather quick wasn't it. Good work though.
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-SpitFire
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SpitFire

2 years ago
Yep... Have to fit a lot into 30secs...lol
Rick

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-Loki
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Loki

2 years ago
One of my favourite warplanes of all time. Looks amazing! smile.gif
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-SpitFire
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SpitFire

2 years ago

-Gfx-Dzine
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Gfx-Dzine

2 years ago
Great job! Wanted to see the finished commercial but it seems to be offline.. (This video does not exist).

-SpitFire
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SpitFire

2 years ago
Sorry... It's supposed to start airing today until July 3rd
Rick

[Link to www.3dartconcepts.com]

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