sounds interesting. have you got a storyboard?

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I have, actually, but It's sooo unreadable for anybody but my own eyes

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jajajaja! Cool!

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MuS@shiROth

Cool, John, looking forward to seeing it. It's good to see that you're telling a story with your animation rather than just animating for the hell of it.

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[Link to www.3dprevis.com]

As said, here is a beta test.

[Link to www.youtube.com]

Please watch in HD.

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Hey John, this is awesome....The animation, the sounds...everything is just great. I just can't wait to see the complete animation...Keep up the good work!

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"Criticizing is easy, art is difficult."

Thanks so much, I do my best.

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awesome John, its coming along very well. you have a good sense for creating atmosphere. If I could make one suggestion.
Try and make your shots more like those from a real life camera, Its not always necessary to move the camera with slow pans across and around the room. keeping some shots still can make it seem more like film with the added bonus of being much more efficient
and keeping the moving shots very subtle is more like you would do if you really were filming. dolly tracks are really expensive.
just a suggestion that comes to mind when I see this. good luck with the rest its looking great.

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Thanks for your suggestions and comments, You are right. I should make more static shots. Thanks, I'll keep on working on it.

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Awesome work John! I can tell that you really enjoy what you are doing.

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Rick

[Link to www.3dartconcepts.com]

Thank you. It is my dream to take part in some big animation movie sometime. If only..

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I think we all share that one in common... Keep up the hard work.

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Rick

[Link to www.3dartconcepts.com]

John i'm no expert, but you create a good atmosphere on this, love it man, cant wait to see more.

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Awww,, well I'm no expert neither, I sometimes make a total mess of what I make. But still, thanks alot, it means alot to me.

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