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-robbiqube
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robbiqube

3 years ago
these just some of the images i've worked on this week, i would like some feed back or comments , please



-musashiroth
Member
musashiroth

3 years ago
IT SUCKS!! HORRIBLE! YOU SHOULD'NT BE ALLOWED TO TOUCH 3DSMAX EVER AGAIN!!!
MuS@shiROth


-robbiqube
Junior Member
robbiqube

3 years ago
i know man!!!!!!!! i suck!!!, i'm not worthy!!!! i'm not worthy!!! the rendering gods are gonna banish me from max heaven!!!

p.s. ( musashiroth, you suck man!!!!! you know you taught you everything you know!!)
jajajajajajajjaa

by the way you could of told me that at the office man

-Tyson
Senior Member
Tyson

3 years ago
nice work. I think the tiling on the alphalt texture is a bit too obvious but other than that its perfect, maybe add a subtle atmosphere because its such a long shot.

I can never look at visualization work and not think to make it look a bit dirtier, things like leaves on the road and in the gutters. dark marks on the asphalt in the parking spaces, subtle gradients of water wear on the building faces etc... can you get away with any of that type of random detail with your clients? wink.gif

-musashiroth
Member
musashiroth

3 years ago
.... u suck... i have no words... exept... UR MOM! hahahahaha!!!! Nah really, nice work man! you're almost as good as Agapo!
MuS@shiROth


-robbiqube
Junior Member
robbiqube

3 years ago
not really tyson, they always ask for really clean projects and in 4 years doing this they always want it cleaner every time

-Osiris
Junior Member
Osiris

3 years ago
I don't know if it is just those views, but there does not appear to be any doors on the buildings.

But I agree with Tyson, more muck needed, tyre marks, oil puddles, roadkill etc.

Also no drainage system in place tongue.gif

Oh, but other wise amazing work!
~=~ Whoever said nothing is impossible never tried pushing a revolving door ~=~

-Nobodyz
Member
Nobodyz

3 years ago
I would suggest "cracks" in the sidewalk, no cement is a "complete" strip. Might be the angle or distance.

-Tyson
Senior Member
Tyson

3 years ago
Oh well smile.gif. Yeah I worked for about six months at an architectural place, I enjoyed it but found it wasnt for me in the long term.

-robbiqube
Junior Member
robbiqube

3 years ago
i know what you mean Tyson but hey, i pays the bills

-robbiqube
Junior Member
robbiqube

3 years ago
yeah, the building has doors, just can't see them from this view, sorry about the architecture( the design sucks, but it's not my design, so what can i do.....)

and thanx for the comments, you guys are right, keep them in mind for the final image

-musashiroth
Member
musashiroth

3 years ago
FIX IT and stop being a little biatch about it! he he he
MuS@shiROth


+Steve Martin
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Steve Martin

3 years ago
You guys' thread's are always entertaining wink.gif
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-Tyson
Senior Member
Tyson

3 years ago
Oh no Its totally a great job. I just meant it wasnt for "me" specifically. I didnt have the type of head for it. I prefer doing stuff that is a bit less structured if I can.

-dragonfly
Member
dragonfly

3 years ago
don“t be EVIL musashiroth, je je, you must be good friends....
nice work robbiqube, i love your vegetation.
Everything has some beauty but not everyone is able to see it (Confucius)

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