I can't see much detail in the model because it is too dark. Could you render out a daytime version so we can all see what is going on?

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Sorry it is way too dark. You might want to look for a monitor calibration tool.

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Yeh, a bit more ambient light would be good. Looks ok from what I can tell but it is hard to see the details.

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Yaeh, I made it rather dark and dire. Here are pics from the standart blue background:

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Not bad man, I can see you have gone to a lot of effort. This is your first modeling project if I remember correctly. Very well done. You have a nice amount of detail in your mesh and you can clearly see parts of the car in the bot model.

Crits: Textures. You really need to look at unwrapping next. Currently you are just using standard shaders and it shows.

Good luck

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The models look great. Some good textures would definately improve it, but it just depends on how far you want to take the project. If you're willing to put in a bit of hard work I'd also suggest learning the ins and outs of a renderer like vray or mental ray so you can really bump up the quality.

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Thanks for the crits.

@Jamie: It's not quite the first robot I made. It's a while ago I modelled a Tranmsformer named Skyfire. You can find him in this forum, too.

@Steve: Most likely mental ray, I couldn't get Vray running on my system and I don't know why... But I will keep that in mind

I took the advise and texture Solidstrikes upgrade. I'm playing that character in an forum based online RP and there he got a jet pack. Of course I modelled that to and this time I tried to texture it. Hope it's not that bad ^^

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Way better job on texturing, Solidstrike, good job. That is way better.

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Yeh, you've done a good job with the texture, especially on the jet pack. With the wings, I think they need a bit of work. Do transformers rust? Or is it dirt?

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