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-griffinax
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griffinax

3 years ago
Just playing around..
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still need to make an atmosphere for it frown.gif
oh and coffee isnt looking like coffee, any help on texturing the coffee? disbelief.gif

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-cdballew
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cdballew

3 years ago
Nice render. I think you just need a little less noise. Giving it a little transparency will help too.
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-johnbeyer
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johnbeyer

3 years ago
Love the brightness. good job.

+VarnishedOtter
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VarnishedOtter

3 years ago
The lighting looks spot on, good job. And the DOF is nice too.

I think the cup may need a little more smoothing, I can see some funny angles in places.

Also, did you do much post on this? It looks like the contrast is a tiny bit overdone.
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+Steve Martin
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Steve Martin

3 years ago
Great render, though the coffee looks a bit thick.
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-desade2009
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desade2009

3 years ago
nice job dude! yes, coffee needs to be a bit less thick..other than that i dont see any problems
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+Jamie
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Jamie

3 years ago
I think this is really well done, I have two suggestions.

1.) The coffee looks like chocolate sauce, I would trying using a water shader and take away the ripples etc. A nice hdri reflection in the liquid would look great.
2.) The composition could be better, try and find a better camera angle and position the cup away from center.

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-griffinax
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griffinax

3 years ago
Thanks and agree with all of you, I did the render in a hurry and just slapped the water texture and changed its color haha.
How much time does a vray render take? I was trying to get it in vray but it would take alot of time frown.gif This is like a 1 minute render in mr tongue.gif
Yes I did a bit of post on this, I'll fix the contrast tongue.gif
@+Jamie
I'll fix the ripples grin.gif I saw it before and I was like lol this looks like an earthquake ripple tongue.gif too much of lumps in between ripplez XD.gif
Yeah need to do more to get a better compo, I'll work on it today, rule of thirds ftw grin.gif


*Edit: Oh I was going for a intense dramatic look on it, kinda like mid 1960's western movie, but yeah I guess i overdid it hehe
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+Jamie
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Jamie

3 years ago
Haha cool man look forward to the next version
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+Steve Martin
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Steve Martin

3 years ago
Your vray question really depends on a lot of factors such as what sort of materials you're using, any effects, (GI, DOF etc) so it's really hard to give a accurate answer.
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-griffinax
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griffinax

3 years ago
Yeah true.. I'll try to be more specific next time tongue.gif
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