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+Jamie
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Jamie

3 years ago
This is my wip thread for the challenge. please give me crits im not all that versed in concept art.

1.) 15 mins roughing in
2.) background and blending
3.) costume change, refined, color corrected.


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+isaac
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isaac

3 years ago
Looks nice! The head looks funny, but I wouldn't change it since it gives her this weird unreal creepy shape. Dirty her up as if she's come back from the dead after getting hit by a swamp boat.

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Jamie

3 years ago
hahahahahahah yea man. Yea i like the head it is wierd and creepy.
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-desade2009
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desade2009

3 years ago
the face looks like its a side-profile, whereas the body seems to suggest more of an angled shot away from the camera... other than that looks good smile.gif a corset even
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+Jamie
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Jamie

3 years ago
Yes I like corests. haha im not sure it will stay. Long way to go yet. I like the strange angle of the head reminds me of an egyptian painting.
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Jamie

3 years ago
update
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-desade2009
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desade2009

3 years ago
very nice smile.gif weird symbols on the body are prerequisites for any undead water nymph worth her salt wink.gif
and yeah no problem about the head it's artistic license after all
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+Jamie
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Jamie

3 years ago
Thanks man.
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-Tyson
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Tyson

3 years ago
I like it so far. my only crit would be that the composition doesnt really tell much of a story. To me she could be a regular goth girl at this stage. there needs to be something a bit more narrative like a book cover, where at a glance you think ahh, its a picture of a water nymph.
maybe more of her figure could open up some possibilities like webbed fingers or reeds in her hair etc..

+Jamie
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Jamie

3 years ago
Yea I have decided that im going to make her more of a queen, I agree she just looks like any goth girl right now I plan to change that. I think im gonna go with a more ice queen feel. Thanks for the crits man.
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Jamie

3 years ago
update 2
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-desade2009
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desade2009

3 years ago
much better clothing smile.gif
i love the pic so far....it's so lonely, and overcast....and blue (in both senses of the word)


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+Jamie
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Jamie

3 years ago
Next to clean it up add the detailing and paint the bloody background hahah ... dieing.
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-desade2009
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desade2009

3 years ago
i think the background's pretty good as it is... but lets see what you come up with smile.gif
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+Jamie
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Jamie

3 years ago
A frozen lake and mountains plus clouds etc.
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-johnbeyer
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johnbeyer

3 years ago
I really respect your skills. Great job man, I really like it.

+Jamie
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Jamie

3 years ago
Thanks dude, no crits
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Jamie

3 years ago
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3 years ago
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+isaac
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isaac

3 years ago
I've got to say, Very nice! I'm on some strong sleeping pills right now so, I'll have to comment on this later

+Jamie
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Jamie

3 years ago
hahaha thanks man I should put all my critics on drugs.
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+isaac
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isaac

3 years ago
I think I do a better job on them.

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