Looks nice! The head looks funny, but I wouldn't change it since it gives her this weird unreal creepy shape. Dirty her up as if she's come back from the dead after getting hit by a swamp boat.

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hahahahahahah yea man. Yea i like the head it is wierd and creepy.

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the face looks like its a side-profile, whereas the body seems to suggest more of an angled shot away from the camera... other than that looks good a corset even

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Yes I like corests. haha im not sure it will stay. Long way to go yet. I like the strange angle of the head reminds me of an egyptian painting.

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update

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very nice weird symbols on the body are prerequisites for any undead water nymph worth her salt
and yeah no problem about the head it's artistic license after all

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Thanks man.

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I like it so far. my only crit would be that the composition doesnt really tell much of a story. To me she could be a regular goth girl at this stage. there needs to be something a bit more narrative like a book cover, where at a glance you think ahh, its a picture of a water nymph.
maybe more of her figure could open up some possibilities like webbed fingers or reeds in her hair etc..

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Yea I have decided that im going to make her more of a queen, I agree she just looks like any goth girl right now I plan to change that. I think im gonna go with a more ice queen feel. Thanks for the crits man.

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much better clothing
i love the pic so far....it's so lonely, and overcast....and blue (in both senses of the word)

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Next to clean it up add the detailing and paint the bloody background hahah ... dieing.

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i think the background's pretty good as it is... but lets see what you come up with

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A frozen lake and mountains plus clouds etc.

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I really respect your skills. Great job man, I really like it.

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Thanks dude, no crits

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I've got to say, Very nice! I'm on some strong sleeping pills right now so, I'll have to comment on this later

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hahaha thanks man I should put all my critics on drugs.

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I think I do a better job on them.

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