My first point would be subject matter, in most of these images the subject matter isn't very interesting. I would say the most interesting shots would be numbers 2 and 3 and so I will focus on them.

Number 2: You really need to pay attention to the rule of thirds here, your subject is center frame, this is generally only used in religious iconography. Also the environment surrounding the subject isn't very
interesting. The diffuse light coming from the window lights the subject well and if the shot were taken in a more interesting location it would be a lot better.

Number 3: This shot follows the rule of thirds however your subjects head has been cut out of the frame, this is generally not something you want to do, it makes the shot feel small. Also I think there may be technical issues with the camera in the shot as the perspective on the stairs seems a bit odd. As with the previous shot the environment could have been better.

I would also like to make a point about what the subject is wearing, often an interesting costume can make a big difference.

Overall: I would say that you need to learn more about composition, lighting and the role of the "set" in your work.

I hope this is helpful

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I agree, number 2 is my fav, but he should be pushed over to the right of the frame with negative space to the side that he is facing. It will give your shot a good sense of scale and spaciousness.

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I agree with VarnishedOtter and Jamie. I think number 2 and 3 are your most interesting shots and with a little bit of work they can become something to be proud of.

Your subject in those two portraits have quite a still contemplative look to them, How about play with some post production techniques to really lift that aspect of the image? Personally I tend to go straight for black and white photographs when thinking of contemplative and moody and most cameras come with bundled software that can make this quite easy. Try turning them black and white and if you have access to photoshop try mayyyybe giving these images a vignette may help.

Best way to learn photography is just keep shooting, find some photographers you really like and try to see if you can almost mimmic their style.

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